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Jargonbusters

I ain't afraid of no CEO's

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Karl Drinkwater
Jul 06, 2026
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In communication it is usually best to use the simplest word that does the task required, unless there is a strong reason for using other words (such as characterising a person, or for a particular style).

This is something that is forgotten by specialists in many industries. Sometimes people want to sound “intelligent” and think that using unnecessary words makes them appear more so; other times it is just laziness or ignorance.

Here are two examples of boardroom buzzwords I found in a single magazine article, along with a few quotes that used the word (again, all from one article!).

Incentivise

Quotes:

  • “This potentially incentivises growth toward an industry...”

  • “we again risk incentivising a specific design approach”

  • “even when mildly incentivised away from doing so”

  • “the risks of incentivising problematic approaches”

Why not just say “encourages” or “encouraging”? It’s a word in common use, that is simpler and more elegant. As evidence, which of these sounds better?

“even when mildly incentivised away from doing so”

or

“even when discouraged from doing so”

I rest my case.

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